Sunday, August 19, 2007

is it sunday already?

Moody Sunday

What's in a mood?

here to there
Never staying to rest long
In her home away
from home

by the weather?
I would seriously ponder
that thought

Tempered by fate
Weathered by change

Not alone on this path

As she swims through a
cluttered mind
Exhaling bubbles of life
Into the unforgotten state
of sweet tasting

this is a poem i wrote last year... and since it's sunday and since i found it today... thought it was appropriate.


The Moody Minstrel said...

For a minute I thought you were making fun of me. Nice poem! I'm still pondering it, though.

Peceli and Wendy's Blog said...

Yes, a lovely poem. Do write more in this way, short lines insteadof sentences, immediate thoughts about your life away from your American home and of course your feelings about being a young mother.

Ammar456 said...

nice! :) look forward to reading more

Olivia said...

I like it, very sensitive and soulful. Freeverse is lovely.

It kind of reminds me of my situation...

Um Naief said...

olivia, believe it or not, i thought of you today and thought the same.... w/ respect to all that's happening w/ you. and i love freeverse as well. it's the only way i write, usually.

moody, hmmmm... lemme know when you've pondered enough :)

wendy, you know, i have the dangest of times writing happy poetry. i swear... it's crazy. i do have one that i wrote a few years ago about bahrain. i'll post it tomorrow. it's a happy one. it's actually the first time i found happiness here... and so the title... "found happiness".

ammar, thanks!!

Olivia said...

Yes, I do believe you thought of me. You wouldn't believe how often I speak of you!